CREATIVE WRITING

Warning: Weird modern non-rhyming poem follows.


i was dreaming
heat and storm
dark clouds
danger
when i woke
sun and ice
calm
the dream was adventure
i like reality better

great one!!!

Thanks!

although it is modern! modern poems are okay as long as they DO make sense! a rose for you!

Ooh, thank you.
Yeah, well, I actually was attempting to make it "non-modern" at first, but I couldn't make any sense of it. It was just a dream I really had....

it's really a cool poem AND i think it fits the season...no offense here...

None taken...

gooooood *g* (ich wollte mich mal mit smiles austoben *g*)

I really think it's good! Sometimes just a few words can express exactly what one feels. One doesn't necessarily need to write a novel about it. ;-) Thumb up!

Thank you!