CREATIVE WRITING

Well, this one's not perfect. I wrote it while waiting at the doctor's (do you say it like that?!) and I had nothing else to do than to think of my only love. ;-) And this is what I made of my thoughts (in the Wartezimmer)

Filling the Gap

I fill my day with images of you,
Grey clouds turn blue and in it – you.
No details really, nothing’s clear
I fill the gap so that you’re near.

They’re ghosts and hard to grasp,
The pure imagination will not last.
And this is why I hope the day
When meeting you will not delay.

T’ is not for long but still a while.
Until that day I won’t deny
Your ghost is sitting next to me
And smiles, your eyes bewitching me.

(01.12.2006)

well..I like it...nice...why didn't I wrote a poem while waiting?? i still have to read a lot *G*

You should publish a volume of collected poetry.
Your poems are wonderful!
Also, it's a great way to spend time...although I most times write stories, not poems :)

oh thanks a lot melly! yes, actually i thought about trying to publish my poems but i don't have enough yet. maybe in a year. ;-) i still want to buy your story book, so bring one to class next time! :-)

Course I'll bring it!
And I'll buy your poetry one when you have finished it :)

me too!!!! i wrote one yesterday but it is very sad and not very good...

your poetry is really great! there's nothing more to say. and i think, it's a really good idea to do some writing when you're waiting. so you don't waste time...