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 Poetry
Mone Offline



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10.03.2006 18:36
Communication Antworten

hi out there!
my god, i think i was kissed by the muse yesterday. and: here is the result! i wrote a (very short) poem. can you imagine that?
here it is:

Communication

Hands touching hands
talking to each other
Eyes meeting eyes
understanding each other
Thoughts addressing thoughts
connecting two
Tell me
Why then do we still need words?

Bye,
Simone

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10.03.2006 20:41
#2 RE: Communication Antworten

Hi Simone!
Great stuff, really.
Actually, you also get a bonus point for posting poetry
After the reaction to poetry tasks in class I thought no one would

Mone Offline



Beiträge: 239

12.03.2006 19:15
#3 RE: Communication Antworten

hi! thanx for the extra bonus! i think the reaction in class can be explained: it's very difficult to write poetry if you have to. as i said: it was not me, it was the muse....

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12.03.2006 19:40
#4 RE: Communication Antworten


hi all,
@simone: good poem...
well i am kissed by the muse too, but only for my term paper *g* but soon i will post things...

coop

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13.03.2006 19:13
#5 RE: Communication Antworten

I wish I was somehow inspired for my term paper (Christenverfolgung beim Wener, for Melanie who might know him), I haven't written a single page yet, but the due date is the end of the next term; I think, there's plenty of time left.
Now to your poem, it's great, in its meaning as well as in how it is written...
I was the one with the concrete poesie thing on "passion fruit", I really envy people who can write "real" poems.
Love, Tamara
P.s. I just love smileys!

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