CREATIVE WRITING

Okay, I told you I can't do this, but you requested it, so here is a poem written by me. Nothing autobiographical, but one morning I just woke up and had that whole thing on my mind. No capital letters on purpose, I just felt like it.

Lack of Communication

you're always the speaker when something is said
and after all that time i am sick of that
you talk to me all the time we are out
and yet you don't even seem to care about
what i feel, what i think, what i want
you just don't

why don't you just shut up
as hard as that seems
i'll tell you about me and
tell you my dreams

please try

well, don't be shy! you DID it! and i like it. you even wrote real verse. i absolutely suck at doing real verse. congratulations!!

what were you shy about anyway? we all aren't professionals at poetry, but I WOULD say, we are not bad!!! so we all should go on!!! i like yours!!! and the spontaneous ones are the best!!