CREATIVE WRITING

hey there! this one doesn't have a title. it's in german. the first one i have written in that language for ages. enjoy (or don't)

Zähneknirschend
Zornesfalten
Augen wie Schlitze
Wildes Tippen

Die Welt zum Kotzen finden
Die Welt hassen
Dich hassen
Mich hassen

Wut
Gefährliches Knäuel in mir
Kocht in mir
Kocht über

Will dich beleidigen
Schlagen
Hassen

Great!
Wow, this is very emotional. And I guess everyone knows exactly how what you express feels...

thanx! i wrote it at a time when i was REALLY angry. i think you can only write something like that in the same moment as you feel it. otherwise it is not authentic enough!

Well,yeah. I think emotion is mostly what poetry as such is about.
But that's just my opinion.
Anyway, you did catchj your feeling at the time very well...and better write a poem than beat someone up...

that's it! and i decided to beat the keyboard of my computer instead. don't know whether it liked it...

i guess it didn't *g* but i also like the poem...full of emotions...good think...we need poems with a meaning..go on!