Sie sind vermutlich noch nicht im Forum angemeldet - Klicken Sie hier um sich kostenlos anzumelden  
Creative writing

CREATIVE WRITING


A writing community for the members of the course at Saarland University

And other friends of writing

Sie können sich hier anmelden
Dieses Thema hat 6 Antworten
und wurde 258 mal aufgerufen
 Poetry
coop Offline



Beiträge: 372

15.09.2006 20:01
a love-poem (or better, supposed to be one ) Antworten
back at writing, facing fears and feelings,
trying to open up to you

you amaze me you fascinate me
make me comfortable, all for you

I'm down, when you're not around
I'm complete when you're holding me

I could go on dreaming but,
even if I open up my eyes, you're still there,
because everything is real

my heart beats faster when I see you
the butterflies are as crazy about you as I am

come around, make me smile,
see me shine for you,
because everything I am is all for you

Mone Offline



Beiträge: 239

15.09.2006 20:38
#2 RE: a love-poem (or better, supposed to be one ) Antworten

sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet! like that one. suppose you're in love, aren't you?!

coop Offline



Beiträge: 372

15.09.2006 21:40
#3 RE: a love-poem (or better, supposed to be one ) Antworten

yes, otherwise i couldn't write something like that....thanx

SugarAnnie Offline



Beiträge: 396

16.09.2006 10:43
#4 RE: a love-poem (or better, supposed to be one ) Antworten

Ooh, love!
This is a really pretty poem

coop Offline



Beiträge: 372

16.09.2006 17:00
#5 RE: a love-poem (or better, supposed to be one ) Antworten

thanx....*g* i never thought i would be able to write a lovepoem, that is NOT sad

redRose ( Gast )
Beiträge:

26.11.2006 12:15
#6 RE: a love-poem (or better, supposed to be one ) Antworten

Oh I know this. I write mostly sad love poems, too. I think that's due to my long distance relationship. But a few months ago when I actually was with my boyfriend (hurray!), he so incredibly overwhelmed me with his love that I wrote a positive text (not a poem but well) after all.

coop Offline



Beiträge: 372

26.11.2006 21:43
#7 RE: a love-poem (or better, supposed to be one ) Antworten

yeah..somehow it is easier to write sad ones...don't now why...maybe because one hasn't the time when one's happy...mmmh..who knows? (but i acutally wrote an other positive poem about him...now i am scarying myself *g* ;-) )

 Sprung  
Footer

This site was made by Melanie. No money is being made.

Xobor Forum Software von Xobor
Einfach ein eigenes Forum erstellen
Datenschutz