CREATIVE WRITING

I wish, you are, we are

I wish I could believe
I wish you knew how I feel
I wish you could feel my pain
I wish I knew what's on your mind
I wish I could tell you what's on mine
I wish I didn't know it's over before the start
I wish I were someone else
I wish you were worth my pain
I wish my dreams could come true
I wish I could forget you

You're not worth my cries at night
You're the one who stole my heart
You're the one who broke it in two
You're the one I should forget
You're the one I shouldn't meet
You're the one I need to see,
You're an a*****e ( *g*),
You should be the last thing on my mind,
You're the one I hate,
but you're the one I love...

We're here where we are
We are what we are
WE aren't we are
We all want somebody to care
WE is the word you and I will never use

Oh, whoa...
this is absolutely great!

Now I'll even less post my poem, it will feel stupid in here...

i swear it won't.....please post it...as i wrote it down , i thought what kind of kitch..but it is still true, at least for the person i wrote it too....

Great!!! i love it. and you didn't want to post one. POST MORE! and i'd love to read more poems by everybody!!! don't be shy, sugarannie, just do it! that's what we did, and now, it's your turn! looking forward to yours

thanx again...as i already said, after this weekend i might post some or one more....

WOW!!!! This is great!! I felt exactly the same way the time after my boyfriend had broken up. Wonderful! Only the *g* after a***e is bothering me. It destroys a little bit the seriousness of the feelings expressed. Take it away, though, and it's perfect!