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 Short stories
**crazy-angel** Offline



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29.01.2009 17:15
Why...? Antworten

Why?

This question hangs in my thoughts firmly.

Why?

I stand here by your grave.

Why?

A layer snow lies on it and on the snow is one red rose.

Why?

You died, because you wanted to protect me.

Why?

One tear channels the way over my cheek and then falls into the snow.

Why?

I have a fear of that what I want to do.

Why?

You, the love of my live, went, without I could say to you, how much I love
you.

Why?

I take my weapon and hold it by my temple.

Why?

This is the only way, how I can be again with you.

Why?

I fire.

Why?

The bang breaks through the almost uncanny silence.

Why?

I slump lifelessly on your grave.

Why?

My weapon falls from my hand.

Why?

A small trail of blood makes its way ontop of the white snow.

Why?

I'm dead, I know it

"Why?"

Your voice breaks the silence.

Why?

I stand up and look around.

Why?

Beside me on the ground somebody lies, Me; Dead.
"Why?", you ask again.
You simply stand there and I point down at my lifeless body.
"Why do you ask? Because of you. I not wanted to be no more alone."

Why?

You come to me and take me in the arm.

Why?

Now I am again with you.

Why?

You free yourself again of me, take my hand and together we leave.

Why?

Away from your grave and away from my corpse.

Why?

Therefore!

Please don't forget who I was, who I am and who i will be.

Mone Offline



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12.02.2009 22:50
#2 RE: Why...? Antworten

wow... it sent shivers down my spine... i like it...

**crazy-angel** Offline



Beiträge: 38

15.02.2009 15:19
#3 RE: Why...? Antworten
Hey danke. schön, dass es dir gefällt.

aber was z.T. heißt "spine"?
SugarAnnie Offline



Beiträge: 396

16.02.2009 09:32
#4 RE: Why...? Antworten

"spine" heißt Wirbelsäule...also lautet der Satz quasi "mir lief es eiskalt den Rücken runter"

Sorry, dass ich die Antwort hier gebe, ich war ja eigentlich nicht gefragt... aber wenn ich schon bei der Vokabelstunde bin: ich glaube, das "therefore" kann nicht ohne was anderes stehen. Mir fällt nur keine bessere Formulierung ein, höchstens "That's why"....

Mone Offline



Beiträge: 239

02.03.2009 20:45
#5 RE: Why...? Antworten

hihi. japp. therefore steht nicht allein. aber: künstlerische freiheit ist das zauberwort!

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